diff ja/collab.tex @ 835:8a3041e6f3cb

reflect comments by Hiroshi Someya.

--- a/ja/collab.tex	Fri Jul 10 02:32:17 2009 +0900
+++ b/ja/collab.tex	Sat Jul 11 19:25:35 2009 +0900
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 %Don't sweep foreseeable social or technical problems under the rug.
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 %Individual lieutenants have their own approaches to reviewing,
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 %Reputation and acclaim don't necessarily cross subsystem or ``people''
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