diff en/collab.tex @ 419:97e929385442

Small typos, plus a perl regexp match. It was stripping newlines!

--- a/en/collab.tex	Tue Aug 26 14:14:24 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/collab.tex	Sun Aug 31 12:14:23 2008 -0400
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@
 take a look at your system documentation to figure out how to install
 it.
 
-On Windows, you'll first need to choose download a suitable ssh
+On Windows, you'll first need to download a suitable ssh
 client.  There are two alternatives.
 \begin{itemize}
 \item Simon Tatham's excellent PuTTY package~\cite{web:putty} provides
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@
 
 When you generate a key pair, it's usually \emph{highly} advisable to
 protect it with a passphrase.  (The only time that you might not want
-to do this id when you're using the ssh protocol for automated tasks
+to do this is when you're using the ssh protocol for automated tasks
 on a secure network.)
 
 Simply generating a key pair isn't enough, however.  You'll need to
@@ -737,7 +737,7 @@
 named something like \dirname{public\_html} in their home directory,
 from which they can serve up web pages.  A file named \filename{foo}
 in this directory will be accessible at a URL of the form
-\texttt{http://www.example.com/\~username/foo}.
+\texttt{http://www.example.com/\~{}username/foo}.
 
 To get started, find the \sfilename{hgweb.cgi} script that should be
 present in your Mercurial installation.  If you can't quickly find a