diff en/mq.tex @ 18:e6f4088ebe52

Generate a PDF file with a feedback link on each paragraph.
author Bryan O'Sullivan <bos@serpentine.com>
date Tue, 04 Jul 2006 16:41:31 -0700
parents 2668e15c76e9
children 187702df428b
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--- a/en/mq.tex	Tue Jul 04 15:00:18 2006 -0700
+++ b/en/mq.tex	Tue Jul 04 16:41:31 2006 -0700
@@ -310,8 +310,8 @@
 
 Here's an example that illustrates how you can use this ability.
 Let's say you're developing a new feature as two patches.  The first
-is a change to the core of your software, and the second--layered on
-top of the first--changes the user interface to use the code you just
+is a change to the core of your software, and the second---layered on
+top of the first---changes the user interface to use the code you just
 added to the core.  If you notice a bug in the core while you're
 working on the UI patch, it's easy to fix the core.  Simply
 \hgcmd{qrefresh} the UI patch to save your in-progress changes, and
@@ -439,8 +439,8 @@
 \begin{itemize}
 \item The context in the middle of a hunk has changed.
 \item A hunk is missing some context at the beginning or end.
-\item A large hunk might apply better--either entirely or in part--if
-  it was broken up into smaller hunks.
+\item A large hunk might apply better---either entirely or in
+  part---if it was broken up into smaller hunks.
 \item A hunk removes lines with slightly different content than those
   currently present in the file.
 \end{itemize}
@@ -629,7 +629,7 @@
 
 The \command{diffstat} command~\cite{web:diffstat} generates a
 histogram of the modifications made to each file in a patch.  It
-provides a good way to ``get a sense of'' a patch--which files it
+provides a good way to ``get a sense of'' a patch---which files it
 affects, and how much change it introduces to each file and as a
 whole.  (I find that it's a good idea to use \command{diffstat}'s
 \texttt{-p} option as a matter of course, as otherwise it will try to