# HG changeset patch
# User gpoirier
# Date 1116099474 0
# Node ID 713d02bb344a62cd22b18c4acd7db9dc33fac7db
# Parent  e05f48b50dd9e43fceca1710638ca3df039d5d62
some more fixes suggested by The Wanderer and Rich

diff -r e05f48b50dd9 -r 713d02bb344a DOCS/xml/en/mencoder.xml
--- a/DOCS/xml/en/mencoder.xml	Sat May 14 18:02:35 2005 +0000
+++ b/DOCS/xml/en/mencoder.xml	Sat May 14 19:37:54 2005 +0000
@@ -666,7 +666,7 @@
   grouped as a frame, even though they are not intended to be shown
   at the same moment in time.
   The MPEG-2 standard used on DVD and digital TV provides both a
-  way to encode the original progressive frames, and to store in
+  way to encode the original progressive frames, and store in
   the header of each frame the number of fields for which it should
   be shown.
   If this method has been used, the movie will often be described
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@
 </para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>
   If <application>MPlayer</application> never shows the framerate
-  change, and two frames out of every five appear combed, your
+  changing, and two frames out of every five appear combed, your
   movie is "hard telecined" 24fps content.
 </para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2 id="menc-feat-dvd-mpeg4-2pass">
-<title>Constant quantizer vs. multi-pass</title>
+<title>Constant quantizer vs. multipass</title>
 
 <para>
   It is possible to encode your movie at a wide range of qualities.
@@ -758,7 +758,7 @@
 
 <para>
   There are three approaches to encoding the video: constant bitrate
-  (CBR), constant quantizer, and multi-pass (ABR, or average bitrate).
+  (CBR), constant quantizer, and multipass (ABR, or average bitrate).
 </para>
 
 <note><title>Note:</title>
@@ -766,9 +766,10 @@
   Most codecs which support ABR encode only support two pass encode
   while some others such as <systemitem class="library">x264</systemitem>
   and <systemitem class="library">libavcodec</systemitem> support
-  multi-pass, which slightly improves quality at each pass,
-  yet this improvement is no longer noticeable after the 6th or so pass.
-  Therefore, in this section, two pass and multi-pass will be used
+  multipass, which slightly improves quality at each pass,
+  yet this improvement is no longer mesurable nor noticeable after the
+  4th or so pass.
+  Therefore, in this section, two pass and multipass will be used
   interchangeably.
 </para>
 </note>