changeset 11049:9da833258d9d

wording improvement
author diego
date Wed, 08 Oct 2003 02:16:50 +0000
parents ee881092a24a
children 373cf18405c4
files DOCS/en/bugreports.html DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml
diffstat 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/DOCS/en/bugreports.html	Wed Oct 08 02:14:48 2003 +0000
+++ b/DOCS/en/bugreports.html	Wed Oct 08 02:16:50 2003 +0000
@@ -260,13 +260,13 @@
 
 <H4><A NAME="core">B.4.6.2 How to extract meaningful information from a core dump</A></H4>
 
-<P>Please create the following command file:</P>
+<P>Create the following command file:</P>
 
 <P><CODE>bt<BR>
   disass $pc-32 $pc+32<BR>
   info all-registers</CODE></P>
 
-<P>Then simply execute the following on your command line:</P>
+<P>Then simply execute this command:</P>
 
 <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<CODE>gdb mplayer --core=core -batch --command=command_file &gt; mplayer.bug</CODE></P>
 
--- a/DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml	Wed Oct 08 02:14:48 2003 +0000
+++ b/DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml	Wed Oct 08 02:16:50 2003 +0000
@@ -292,13 +292,13 @@
 <sect3 id="bugreports_core">
 <title>How to extract meaningful information from a core dump</title>
 <para>
-Please create the following command file:
+Create the following command file:
 <screen>
 bt
 disass $pc-32 $pc+32
 info all-registers
 </screen>
-Then simply execute the following on your command line:
+Then simply execute this command:
 <screen>gdb mplayer --core=core -batch --command=<replaceable>command_file</replaceable> &gt; mplayer.bug</screen>
 </para>
 </sect3>