changeset 412:a168daed199b

Fix typos

--- a/en/hook.tex	Tue Aug 26 20:49:37 2008 +0200
+++ b/en/hook.tex	Tue Aug 26 13:55:04 2008 -0700
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
 \end{figure}
 
 All hooks follow the pattern in example~\ref{ex:hook:init}.  You add
-an entry to the \rcsection{hooks} section of your \hgrc\.  On the left
+an entry to the \rcsection{hooks} section of your \hgrc.  On the left
 is the name of the event to trigger on; on the right is the action to
 take.  As you can see, you can run an arbitrary shell command in a
 hook.  Mercurial passes extra information to the hook using

--- a/en/intro.tex	Tue Aug 26 20:49:37 2008 +0200
+++ b/en/intro.tex	Tue Aug 26 13:55:04 2008 -0700
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@
 every revision control operation I have benchmarked.  I have measured
 its advantage as ranging from a factor of two to a factor of six when
 compared with Subversion~1.4.3's \emph{ra\_local} file store, which is
-the fastest access method available).  In more realistic deployments
+the fastest access method available.  In more realistic deployments
 involving a network-based store, Subversion will be at a substantially
 larger disadvantage.  Because many Subversion commands must talk to
 the server and Subversion does not have useful replication facilities,

--- a/en/template.tex	Tue Aug 26 20:49:37 2008 +0200
+++ b/en/template.tex	Tue Aug 26 13:55:04 2008 -0700
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@
 
 We could have included the text of the template file directly in the
 style file by enclosing it in quotes and replacing the newlines with
-``\texttt{\\n}'' sequences, but it would have made the style file too
+``\verb!\n!'' sequences, but it would have made the style file too
 difficult to read.  Readability is a good guide when you're trying to
 decide whether some text belongs in a style file, or in a template
 file that the style file points to.  If the style file will look too

--- a/en/tour-basic.tex	Tue Aug 26 20:49:37 2008 +0200
+++ b/en/tour-basic.tex	Tue Aug 26 13:55:04 2008 -0700
@@ -66,9 +66,14 @@
 a compatible version of Universal MacPython~\cite{web:macpython}.  This
 is easy to do; simply follow the instructions on Lee's site.
 
+It's also possible to install Mercurial using Fink or MacPorts,
+two popular free package managers for Mac OS X.  If you have Fink,
+use \command{sudo apt-get install mercurial-py25}.  If MacPorts,
+\command{sudo port install mercurial}.
+
 \subsection{Windows}
 
-Lee Cantey also publishes an installer of Mercurial for Windows at
+Lee Cantey publishes an installer of Mercurial for Windows at
 \url{http://mercurial.berkwood.com}.  This package has no external
 dependencies; it ``just works''.
 

--- a/en/undo.tex	Tue Aug 26 20:49:37 2008 +0200
+++ b/en/undo.tex	Tue Aug 26 13:55:04 2008 -0700
@@ -194,6 +194,8 @@
 So remember, to revert a \hgcmd{rename}, you must provide \emph{both}
 the source and destination names.  
 
+% TODO: the output doesn't look like it will be removed!
+
 (By the way, if you rename a file, then modify the renamed-to file,
 then revert both components of the rename, when Mercurial restores the
 file that was removed as part of the rename, it will be unmodified.
@@ -282,6 +284,8 @@
 changeset.  Finally, it merges back to the previous parent of the
 working directory, and commits the result of the merge.
 
+% TODO: to me it looks like mercurial doesn't commit the second merge automatically!
+
 \begin{figure}[htb]
   \centering
   \grafix{undo-non-tip}
@@ -644,7 +648,7 @@
 Even though we had~40 changesets to search through, the \hgcmd{bisect}
 command let us find the changeset that introduced our ``bug'' with
 only five tests.  Because the number of tests that the \hgcmd{bisect}
-command grows logarithmically with the number of changesets to
+command performs grows logarithmically with the number of changesets to
 search, the advantage that it has over the ``brute force'' search
 approach increases with every changeset you add.